> Researchers found aging-like cognitive effects in mice by altering the CaMKII brain protein
Only 3 more words than the original, but contains quite a bit more information about what exactly the claim is while still having a strong "hook".
> Researchers found aging-like cognitive effects in mice by altering the CaMKII brain protein
Only 3 more words than the original, but contains quite a bit more information about what exactly the claim is while still having a strong "hook".