You may make an otherwise excellent case that lobbying is not intrinsically evil. Without judging that one way or the other, I will say that the sentence the grand-parent complained about bothered me too. It smacks of self-satisfied logic chopping, but it's complete bunk. If we can assume that some professions essentially require evil acts of people in the profession, then it's pretty natural (and reasonable) to call the profession evil. Again - whether or not lobbying falls into that category is not my concern.
For me the bottom line is that you don't even need that claim. You could have simply started the paragraph by saying that we shouldn't be too quick to generalize about lobbyists, since blah blah blah.
(Off-topic, but there's an odd typo in the first sentence of the piece: "Last weekend Eric Schmidt stateād the obvious." You don't want that apostrophe.)
For me the bottom line is that you don't even need that claim. You could have simply started the paragraph by saying that we shouldn't be too quick to generalize about lobbyists, since blah blah blah.
(Off-topic, but there's an odd typo in the first sentence of the piece: "Last weekend Eric Schmidt stateād the obvious." You don't want that apostrophe.)