If you look through the marketing lingo, this does show some basic info that every investor wants to know:
* who are the founders and what is their experience?
* what is it? (freelance network for creatives)
* what is the size of the market? ($500b)
* what is the business model? (20% cut for arranging contracts)
* growth rate? (linear, but decent)
Things some people might want to know that were missing
* who are your competitors?
* how much are you asking for? for what portion of your company?
You say they're missing important metrics. What metrics are you looking for? They gave user growth, money in contracts posted in a month, and even gave user retention rate and contract acceptance rate.
* who are the founders and what is their experience?
* what is it? (freelance network for creatives)
* what is the size of the market? ($500b)
* what is the business model? (20% cut for arranging contracts)
* growth rate? (linear, but decent)
Things some people might want to know that were missing
* who are your competitors?
* how much are you asking for? for what portion of your company?
You say they're missing important metrics. What metrics are you looking for? They gave user growth, money in contracts posted in a month, and even gave user retention rate and contract acceptance rate.