"Ed had shouted on them like this"
"No real kidnapper hauls around a struggling, scream-seeking captive"
"I see I need to show the adolescent asshole affecting to be me "
Broken sentences like these make the stories a bit of a chore to read.
"Ed had shouted on them like this"
"No real kidnapper hauls around a struggling, scream-seeking captive"
"I see I need to show the adolescent asshole affecting to be me "
Broken sentences like these make the stories a bit of a chore to read.